Draft...fight
Sep. 27th, 2007 02:22 pmStill gonna work on it or write a better one eventually. This does not showcase that seamlessness, brutality or kinetic fluidity I wanted to get across or the way that these guys are in sync with each other. Doesn't highlight the small differences in how they fight as well. Ah, well. Next time. Must stop writing at the wee hours of dawn.
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